Here's a cleaner, more detailed, typed version of one of the sheets from my 'Planning' post:
Receiving the letter
I hear the sound - close up of walking feet glitching to flashback
Echoes beneath
Angels and skylines meet - spinning shot of the canopy of trees, glitching to flashback
And I'm straining to reach - walking with lantern, with glitch
The light on the surface
Light on the other side
I feel the pages turning - Burning the letter and lip-syncing
I see the candle burning down
Before my eyes
Before my wild eyes - look at camera
I feel you holding me - meeting and struggling, glitching back to before *
Tighter I cannot see
When will we finally
Breathe x 7 -flashbacks and lead through forest - lots of flashback narrative here
I feel the pages turning - jerk to a stop
I see the candle burning down -time lapse of the fallen lantern burning down
Before my eyes -focus on her looking down
Before my wild eyes - eyes up to camera
I feel you holding me - hands on shoulders and glitch to past hug
Tighter I cannot see - he pushes her to her knees
When will we finally - puts dagger to her throat, she closes her eyes and takes a breath
Breathe x 7 - flashbacks - end o black and white of present *
Instrumental - fighting
Breathe x 7 - still fighting and at the last 'breathe' she is over him and inhales and lifts up the dagger then it cuts
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